Composition Samples
نماذج للإنشاءات
للصف الثالث متوسط
الوحدة الأولى
Unit one A holiday Postcard
(البطاقة البريدية)
للبطاقة البريدية في الوحدة الأولى موضوعان.
1- (A Fantastic Holiday) موضوع يدور حول قضاء عطلة رائعة
2-(A Horrible Holiday) وموضوع حول عطلة مريعة أو سيئة
. وقد يأتي السؤال حول هذا الإنشاء بعدة أنماط نذكر منها
Write a postcard to a friend telling him about your holiday.
أنت هنا حر في الكتابة عن عطلة رائعة أو سيئة
Write a postcard to a friend telling him about your(fantastic / great) holiday. أكتب عن عطلة رائعة
Write a postcard to a friend telling him about your horrible holiday. أكتب عن عطلة مريعة
Write a short of an unusual holiday. هنا أيضا أكتب عن عطلة مريعة
الأشياء التي سنكتب عنها في البطاقة البريدية
1.The place (country / city) حدد المكان بلد أو مدينة
2.Who is with you (family / friends) من معك في الرحلة عائلتك وأصدقائك
3.Where are you staying (hotel, beach apartment, caravan park….)حدد مكانة الاقامة (فندق-شقة وغيرها )
4.The weather / the food / the people تكلم عن الطقس ، الطعام والناس
5.What you and your (family / friends) are doing. ما الذي تفعله الآن
6.What there is to see ما الأماكن التي تستحق المشاهد
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النموذج الأول
A Fantastic Holiday
عطلة رائعة
Dear Ali,
I’m writing to tell you about my fantastic holiday in Syria. I’m here with my friends Samir and Kareem and we are staying in a beach apartment. The weather is warm and sunny and the food is great. The people here are very friendly. Now, I’m relaxing on the beach. Samir and Kareem are playing volleyball. Every day we go sightseeing in the
city. It’s fantastic.
See you soon
Ahmed
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A Horrible Holiday
النموذج الثاني
عطلة مريعة
Dear Ali,
I’m writing to tell you about my horrible holiday in Amman. I’m here with my friends Samir and Kareem and we are staying in a cheap hotel. Our room is small and dirty. The weather is cold and there is no hot water in the shower. The food is good but it’s expensive so we eat falafel most of the time. Now we are having lunch in our hotel room. The people are very rude and unfriendly. We can’t go sightseeing in the city because we lost all our money. Please send us some money to come back home.
See you soon
Ahmed
Unit Two AMenu
(قائمة الطعام)
الوحدة الثانية
Write a traditional menu for tourists in your country.
Write description of the dishes and add prices.
Babylon Restaurant
Traditional Iraqi Food
مقبلات
Starters:
Meat soup 500 IQD
Salad 500 IQD
Jajeek – chopped cucumber with yogurt 500 IQD الحلويات
Desserts:
Ice Cream 1.000 IQD
Casters 1.000 IQD
Jelly 1.000 IQD
الوجبة الرئيسية
Main Course:
Kabab 5.000 IQD
Masgoof - grilled fish 10.000 IQD
Tashreeb – Iraqi bread in meat soup 10. 000 IQD
المشروبات
Drinks:
Mineral Water 500 IQD
Tea 500 IQD
Soft Drinks 500 IQD
Fruit Juice 1.000 IQD
Unit Three A Description of a Person
وصف شخص آنت تعرفه
قد يأتي سؤال الإنشاء حول وصف الشخصية بأسلوبين أو ثلاثة و من هذه الأساليب
Write a description of someone you know well.
Write a description of a person. A relative, a friend. A teacher or someone you know well.
قد يأتي السؤال دون مطاليب وقد تعطى مجموعة من المطاليب يجب اتباعها. في هذا الإنشاء يجب أن نكتب ثلاثة فقرات الأولى تتضمن المعلومات الشخصية، و الثانية تتضمن المظهر الخارجي و الثالثة تتحدث عن النواحي الشخصية للشخص الذي نتحدث عنه. و المطاليب هي نفسها الموجودة في كتاب الطالب،. و هذا مثال عن الإنشاء.
My best friend is called Ali. He is 17 years old. He is from Baghdad. However he lives in Babylon with his parents and his two sisters. He is interested in computers.
Ali has got a short black hair and a round face. He looks like his father. For example they have got the same blue eyes.
Ali likes helping people. For example he helps all his friends. He likes wearing casual clothes. However he sometimes wears formal clothes. For example, a shirt and a tie. He is very friendly and outgoing and I like him very much.
Unit Four A Celebrity Profile
لمحه لحياة مشهور
تماما كإنشاء الوحدة الثالثة تأتي صيغة السؤال هنا بأسلوبين
Write a profile of a famous person.
Write a profile of a Celebrity.
مجددا يتكون الإنشاء من ثلاثة فقرات
(Three Paragraphs). تتكلم الفقرة الأولى عن المعلومات الشخصية و المظهر الخارجي و الملابس المفضلة، بينما تتحدث الفقرة الثانية عن النجاحات المهنية. أما الفقرة الأخيرة فتتحدث عن الحياة العائلية والأنشطة المحببة في أوقات الفراغ و هنا مثال على هذا الإنشاء
Hawar Mulla Mohammed is a professional Iraqi footballer. He was born in Dahook in 1988. He has got a long black hair and a round face. He likes wearing casual clothes. For example, jeans and T-shirt. Hawar played for the Iraqi team In Athens Olympics in 2004. He played very well and he with the Iraqi team was fourth in Athens. After Athens, Hawar played for many football clubs in Cyprus, Iran, the UAE and Qatar. Hawar now lives in Qatar with his family. He has got to sons. In his free time he likes go shopping with his family.
Athens Olympics الألعاب الأولمبيّة أثينا – clubs نوادي - Cyprus قبرص - the UAE (United Arab Emirates) الامارات العربية المتحدة
Q/ In three paragraphs, write a description of any famous person you like. Include the following information:
What he/she looks like.
What clothes he/she likes to wear.
What he/she is famous for.
Information about his/her best work
Information about his/her family, where he/she lives and his/her life.
Remember to use linking words: (for example / however / too / also / etc.) and use superlatives and comparatives.
Mohammed Al-Jawaheri is an Iraqi poet. He was born in An-Najaf in 1899. He is tall and good looking. He has a little short grey hair and brown eyes. He likes wearing formal clothes, for example, trousers, shirts and jackets. He always wears a small hat.
Al-Jawaheri is very famous for his elegant poetry which follows the style of the classical Arabic poetry. Al-Jawaheri is more famous than any other poets oh his generation. He was called Arab's greatest poet. His works were published in seven volumes and his poetry is very popular all over the Arab world. Al-Jawaheri has been married when he was twenty three, and had one son called Forat. He travels a lot during his life but finally he settled down and died in Damascus in 1997.
Poetشاعر - poetry شعر - Hat قبعة - elegant رائع - volumesمجلدات - generation جيل publish ينشر settle downيسكن , يستقر - Damascusمدينة دمشق
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Unit Five A Leaflet(Voluntary Work)
إعلان عن عمل تطوع
يتحدث إنشاء هذه الوحدة عن العمل التطوعي و كيفية إعداد نشرة إعلانية للتعريف بالعمل التطوعي و نقدم هنا مخطط توضيحي نحاول فيه قدر الإمكان تبسط الأمر فيما يخص المنشور الإعلاني حول العمل التطوعي
. 1-العنوان العام للعمل التطوعي
. 2-التاريخ الذي سيحدث فيه العمل التطوعي
. 3-نبذة مختصرة عن طبيعة العمل التطوعي إضافة إلى ذكر السبب الذي من أجلها قمنا بالعمل
.4- ماذا يجب على المتطوعون فعله( نضع ذلك في نقاط)
يأتي هذا الإنشاء بعدة طرق نذكر منها
Q1 Write a leaflet about a voluntary work to raise money for a charity.
(صيغة عامة)
A Long Bicycle Ride
10th – 12th Aug, 2011
We are looking for volunteers to help us. We are going to ride bicycles from Al_Habbaniya city to Al-Ramadi. You can have fun and raise money for cancer research at the same time. There will be free food and drinks for volunteers along the way to Al-Ramadi.
What Volunteers have to do:
Register your names
Come on the right time
Wear comfortable clothes
Find people to sponsor you (5.000 IQD at least)
For more information call us on this number: 0123456789
Q2 Write a leaflet about a school exhibition to raise money for a charity.
(حول معرض مدرسي)
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A School Exhibition
10th – 12th Aug, 2011
We are looking for volunteers to help us. We are going to hold a school exhibition to raise money for poor students in the school. You can help make this exhibition successful. There will be free sandwiches and drinks for volunteers and visitors.
What volunteers have to do:
Come on the right time
Wear formal clothes
Invite your friends and family
Ask people to sponsor the exhibition (5.000 IQD at least)
For more information call us on this number: 0123456789
Q3 Write a leaflet about a voluntary work to protect the environment.
(حول حماية البيئة)
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Make the City a Better Place
10th – 15th Aug, 2011
We are looking for volunteers to help us. We are going to make a voluntary work to clean the city. We want to clean the main streets, the bridge and the bank of the river. You can have fun and meet new friends. There will be free drinks and food for volunteers.
What Volunteers have to do:
Register your names
Come on the right time
Wear comfortable clothes
Invite your friends to help us
For more information call us on this number: 0123456789
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Unit Six Writing an E-mail
كتابة الايميل
يتحدث إنشاء الوحدة السادسة حول كتابة أيميل (بريد الكتروني) للاستفسار و طلب المعلومات حول شيء نود شرائه من أحد المواقع الالكتروني (كموقع نوكيا على سبيل المثال أو أحد مواقع شركات السيارات) و لهذا النوع من الإيميل صيغة معينة و نقوم هنا بتقديم المخطط التوضيحي لكيفية ترتيب هذا الإيميل
. هناك صيغة ثابتة نستخدمها قبل البدء بنص الرسالة و هي
Name: _______________
Address: _____________
E-mail Address: _______________
Subject: _________________
Comments Questions:
نص الإيميل و يفضل أن تبدأه كالآتي
I’d like some more information about _____________________________________
بعد كتابة المقدمة نضع في نقاط الأشياء التي نريد الاستفسار عنها حول السلعة التي نريد شرائها
في الصفحة التالية هناك نموذجا للإيميل و الذي يعد تطبيقا للمخطط التوضيحي أعلاه
Q Write an email asking for something you want to buy.
WW.TOYOTA.COM
Name: Luis Nazario De Lima Ronaldo
Address: Brazilia, Brazil, P.O Box 3422
E-Mail Address:r9ronaldo@yahoo.com
Subject: Toyota Camry 2011
Comments / Questions
I'd like some more information about your new model of Toyota Camry:
* What is the price of a full option car?
* What is the horse power of the car?
* What are the available colours of the car?
* Can you please send me a catalogue of the car by post?
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Q2 Read the following part of your pen friend e-mail. Then write an e-mail answering your friend’s questions. I had a great weekend. We spent happy days camping in the forest. The best part was cooking on fire. What did you do last weekend? Did you have a lot of homework? I have just started writing my diary, do you write a diary, or anything else? I have also started reading a daily newspaper. Do you read news papers or magazines? Which do you like best?
ينص السؤال على أن صديقك أرسل ليك أيميل و يتوجب عليك الإجابة على أسئلة صديقك من خلال أيميل ترسله له. لن
(in One Paragraph) يكون لدينا هنا صيغة معينة لكتابة الإيميل. ليس علينا إلا أن نجيب عن الأسئلة في فقرة واحدة
Dear Ali,
Last weekend I went with my family to my grandfather’s house in the mountains. It was great because I didn’t have a lot of homework. I don’t write a diary but sometimes I wrote short stories. I read a lot of newspapers and my favorite news paper is Al_Sabah.
See you next week
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Unit Seven Giving Instructions
أعطاء التوضيحات
يرتكز إنشاء هذه الوحدة حول إعطاء التعليمات لاستخدام جهاز معين. سنضع هنا نموذجين؛ أحدهما مذكور في الكتاب وهو حول استخدام الكاميرا الرقمية و سنضيف إنشاءً آخراً يتضمن تعليمات حول كيفية إجراء مكالمة باستخدام الهاتف المحمول.
Q Write instructions about using a digital camera.
(تعليمات استخدام الكاميرا الرقمية)
First, make sure there are batteries in your camera.
Then, switch on the camera.
Before you take a photo make sure of the light. For example, always let the light is behind the camera.
When you finish taking photos, connect the camera to the PC.
Choose the pictures you want to print.
Finally, use the printer to draft your photos.
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Q Write instructions about using a mobile phone.
(تعليمات استخدام الهاتف المحمول)
First, press the menu button.
Then, go to Contacts.
Choose the person you want to call.
Press the call button or the green button.
When you finish your call, press the end button or the red button.
internet page.
كيفية كتابة صفحة انترنت عن مدينة (your page should have three paragraphs )
The first one is the introduction. Here you should give information about location, character, population and history. So this is a general look to the city.
في بداية الانشاء تكتب المقدمة وفيها معلومات عن موقع المدينة وميزتها أي طبيعتها وسكانها وتأريخها أي تكتب نظرة عامة عن المدينة
The second paragraph is sightseeing. Here you can ask yourself “Why do I come to see this city?”. So in this part you should recommend places to visit and the local landscape.
في الفقرة الثانية تكتب عن معالم المدينة والأماكن التي ينصح بزيارتها حيث تسأل نفسك هذا السؤال
ماهي الاماكن والمهمة والمناظر الطبيعية الجميلة التي لابد من زيارتها في هذه المدينة
The third one is leisure. What does that mean? It means that if you visit my city you can have a lot of fun and comfort. So here you should give information about sports, tourism and going out.
في الفقرة الاخيرة والثالثة تكتب عن الاماكن الترفيهية التي تستطيع ان تزاول فيها الرياضة وغيرها من التسالي
لاتنسى استخدام ادوات الربط هذه في كتابة الانشاء Don’t forget to use some linking like ( also , as well as, too …. )
وألان اليك نموذج من الانشاء Now, this is a sample for my internet page.
Babylon is a beautiful city in Iraq. It is about 100 km to the south of Baghdad. It is a multicultural city of over one million. It was founded in 1867 BC in ancient Mesopotamia.
There are many places to visit like the famous ancient city ,The Lion of Babylon, Ishtar Gate, the code of common law of King Hammurabi and the interesting local market.
There are many things to do in Babylon and it is a great city to live. You can also watch some volleyball matches, the city’s main sport. As well as that, there are many places to visit outside the city like Shrine of Zaid bin Ali bin Al-Hussein and the Beer of the Prophet Ayewob
متعددة الثقافات Multicultural
تأسستFounded
قبل الميلادBC
بلاد مابين النهرين القديمة Ancient Mesopotamia
مسلة الملك حمورابي the code of common law of King Hammurabi
مرقد – ضريح – مزار – مقام Shrine
نبي Prophet
هذه صيغة السؤال للكتابة عن مطعم او مقهى مفضل
Q / You are in your favourite café or restaurant. In three paragraphs, write about the following
Say what you are eating and drinks.
Describe the food and drink.
Say when you went there last time
Say who you go there with.
Describe how you can get there from your home.
Remember to use adjectives and linking words: (also/and/too/because)
مطعم مفضل My favorite restaurant
I'm in Sobat Restaurant now. I am having lunch with my friend, Abeer. We are eating a delicious dish and drinking orange juice. The waiters are friendly. The service is also good. I and my friend come to this restaurant every Friday. We have good food and also we enjoy our time. Last Friday we were there, but we left early because we have some exams. We go to the restaurant on foot and we have good time there every week.
مقهى مفضل My favorite café
I'm in my favorite café now. I'm eating a piece of cake and drinking a glass of orange juice with my friend, Abeer. The cake is lovely and the orange is lovely, too. I and my friend come to this café every Friday. We have good food and also we enjoy our time. Last Friday we were there, but we left early because we have some exams. We go to the café on foot and we have good time there every week.
Lubna Ali,
20, AL-Salam Street,
Najaf,
Iraq.
A holiday postcardبطاقة بريدية
عنوان المرسل إليه
مكان وتاريخ كتابة الرسالة
Baghdad, June
Dear Lubna,
It's great here. The weather is brilliant. Our apartment is fantastic. It has got big rooms and beautiful bedrooms, too. It's also got an excellent furniture. I'm sitting on the balcony now. My sister and I go shopping and trekking in the mountains. The food is great. The people are friendly. Sometimes we go sailing.
See you soon!
Ashjan
نماذج اسئلة
Q1. Choose ONE of the questions below and write a paragraph answer.
1- Your local computer shop is organising a competition. Write a letter addressed to the manager and
answer these questions to win the first prize: a computer.
a-What three things do you use a computer for most (surfing the net, e-mailing...)?
b-How have you used a computer to help you with your school work? Give examples.
c-Who else in your family uses a computer?
2- Write a leaflet about protecting the environment. Include illustrations advising people in your city.
Q2. Choose ONE of the questions below and write a paragraph answer.
1- Write a brochure inviting tourists to visit your town or village. Include information about places they can visit, things they can do, where they can eat… Give your brochure a title.
2- Write a short story about an unusual trip. Here are some ideas to write about:
a- Where did you go?
b- How did you travel?
c- What did you do?
d- What was unusual about the trip?
e- Did you enjoy yourself?
2- Write a short story about an unusual trip. Here are some ideas to write about:
a- Where did you go?
b- How did you travel?
c- What did you do?
d- What was unusual about the trip?
e- Did you enjoy yourself.
Test C: Writing page 49 (activity book)
Q/ Imagine you want to raise money for an organisation. Write an e-mail to one of the sponsors explaining what you want to do. Include the following information:
Who you are/what you do/which group of volunteers you are in.
Reasons for writing/what you need to collect (money/clothes/toys/medicine, etc.)
For who/what you need the things for (disabled children/ill friend/poor people/local hospital/ etc)
How much time you have to collect the things.
Plans to organize other events (what events and in what ways)
Your e-mail address (you can invent it)
Follow the format of the e-mail:
name:
E-mail address:
Subject:
Comments/questions:
Name: Sarah Abbas اسم المرسل
Subject: save orphan childrenموضوع الرسالة
Comments/Questions التعليقات والأسئلة
Dear Manager,
My name is Sarah Abbas and I am a student in Al-Hamidat Intermediat school for girls in Al-Najaf city. I am doing a voluntary work with some of my classmates and we formed a group called "a save the orphan children" we are going to hold sponsored run to raise money for helping orphan children in our local area. The sponsored run is going to take three days to cover the distance from Najaf to Karbala. We need your help to sponsor the event. If you agree, then we have other future plans to raise money for disabled people and homeless children.
We are looking forward for your help.
Your, Sarah Abbas
Test D: Writing page 59 (Activity book)
Q/ Write a letter to someone who will not open it until the year 2025. Describe some ideas of modern technology you use today. Include the following information:
What you use.
What it does.
How it works.
How it has changed your life.
What do you think someone will think when they read your letter in 20 years time?
To my grandson Kareem.
When you open this letter you have to know that it was written thirteen years ago. I like to tell you about a very exciting device we are using nowadays. It's called "I Pad". It's a touch screen is almost the same size of an A4 page. You can use it as a professional computer to work on programs, to listen to music, to send or receive e-mails or just to surf the internet. It doesn't need to be plugged into a power source because it has a rechargeable battery. It has helped me a lot because it's easy to use and very light to carry so I can take it with me anywhere.
Good luck for all
2013